初級寫作修改-003

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Today is Thurday.
I piay bad­minton with Betty.
It very fun.
I study Eng­lish and math,
Today is very happy.

建議修改為
Today is Thurs­day. I played bad­minton with Bet­ty. It was fun. I stud­ied Eng­lish and math. I am very hap­py today.

第二句的地方­play拼錯並且要用過去式
第三句缺動詞
第四句動詞要用過去式
最後一句怪怪的
是“今天高興“還是“我今天很高興”？
缺乏的是主詞喔!!^^