bet­ty   Today my fam­i­ly went to restau­rant on the Father’s Day.We ate cabbage,rice,tofu and soup. It’s very good.I and Ruby stud­ied English.Today was very happy. Today I went to a […]…

Ruby Today is very happy.Becuse the Moon Fes­ti­val, we are shoot off fire­works and eat pome­los. Every­body can relax and enjoy the joy of a reunion. So,I very excit­ed on Moon Festiv […]…

Sarah This Fri­day to Sun­day, I told the aunt. Cousin. Father. Moth­er and broth­er togeth­er to Taitung to find a very small peri­od of aunt I now look for­ward to the arrival Friday. I…

原文： Ice Cream acts a love-brige roll dur­ing my par­ents and me; it sym­bols some­thing changes bet­ter. Today I was encour­aged from my Mom about my hand-made busi­ness after invit­ing […]…

bet­ty   Today is very hap­py because it’s not go to school.I study Eng­lish and clean my bedroom.It very tired. 原句應改為 I am very hap­py today because I don’t have to go to school. […]…

Sarah   Gina says that he did­n’t came an Eng­lish lan­guage class yes­ter­day. So had no time to get along with him. 原句應改為 Gina said that she won’t come to the Eng­lish class any­ […]…

Ruby Today is Wednesday. we are study Eng­lish list­ed music and play com­put­er game. So,today is fine. 好，第二句又重複動詞了喔!!而且要注意拼字的部分，還有時態!!所以第二句應改成We stud­ied Eng­lish, lis­tened to music, […]…

ruby Today is Thurday. I piay bad­minton with Betty. It very fun. I study Eng­lish and math, Today is very happy.   建議修改為 Today is Thurs­day. I played bad­minton with Bet­ty. […]…

bet­ty Today is very hot.My sis­ter her hands is hurt.It is very ache.Ruby and I are eat two apples. I study  English.Chinese and math.I am very happy.   建議修改為: It is hot toda […]…

appleh21233 Today I feel badly. Because I and my friend not talk happy.She always not to friend­ly to me,because she think I am her friend.But I don’t like this , I have feel­ing . […]…