betty Today my family went to restaurant on the Father’s Day.We ate cabbage,rice,tofu and soup. It’s very good.I and Ruby studied English.Today was very happy. Today I went to a […]…
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Ruby Today is very happy.Becuse the Moon Festival, we are shoot off fireworks and eat pomelos. Everybody can relax and enjoy the joy of a reunion. So,I very excited on Moon Festiv […]…
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Sarah This Friday to Sunday, I told the aunt. Cousin. Father. Mother and brother together to Taitung to find a very small period of aunt I now look forward to the arrival Friday. I…
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原文： Ice Cream acts a love-brige roll during my parents and me; it symbols something changes better. Today I was encouraged from my Mom about my hand-made business after inviting […]…
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betty Today is very happy because it’s not go to school.I study English and clean my bedroom.It very tired. 原句應改為 I am very happy today because I don’t have to go to school. […]…
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Sarah Gina says that he didn’t came an English language class yesterday. So had no time to get along with him. 原句應改為 Gina said that she won’t come to the English class any […]…
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Ruby Today is Wednesday. we are study English listed music and play computer game. So,today is fine. 好，第二句又重複動詞了喔!!而且要注意拼字的部分，還有時態!!所以第二句應改成We studied English, listened to music, […]…
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ruby Today is Thurday. I piay badminton with Betty. It very fun. I study English and math, Today is very happy. 建議修改為 Today is Thursday. I played badminton with Betty. […]…
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betty Today is very hot.My sister her hands is hurt.It is very ache.Ruby and I are eat two apples. I study English.Chinese and math.I am very happy. 建議修改為: It is hot toda […]…
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appleh21233 Today I feel badly. Because I and my friend not talk happy.She always not to friendly to me,because she think I am her friend.But I don’t like this , I have feeling . […]…