sihanlu 
- Dear annayeh or teacher:
Thank for your kind encouragment and correction. Now, my confidence of English shines again after receiving my teacher’s letter,saying that much effort needed put on sentence structure on Thursday. More importantly, your feedback toward the short passage makes me discovery the true weakness i have,chinese English. ha ha. I was proud of English ability when i was in high school. Now, building the brandnew confidence of English emerges as the short-term goal i am going to realize. As a student,MBA degree, i study in Kaohsiung. Nice to meet you. Thanks.<br />best regards,
Hanst
hi Hanst, just call me Anna!!^^
i think your English is good enough to communicate with people, maybe your teacher wants you to be better because you are studying in MBA. now, about the passage above, the only problem is that in this following sentence, “building the brandnew confidence of English emerges as the short-term goal i am going to realize” if you can change the word “realize” to “reach” will be better. we reach goals, and realize some truth. and that’s all you need to correct. keep going!!^^
