Sarah This Friday to Sunday, I told the aunt. Cousin. Father. Mother and brother together to Taitung to find a very small period of aunt I now look forward to the arrival Friday. I…
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原文: Ice Cream acts a love-brige roll during my parents and me; it symbols something changes better. Today I was encouraged from my Mom about my hand-made business after inviting […]…
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betty Today is very happy because it’s not go to school.I study English and clean my bedroom.It very tired. 原句應改為 I am very happy today because I don’t have to go to school. […]…
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Sarah Gina says that he didn’t came an English language class yesterday. So had no time to get along with him. 原句應改為 Gina said that she won’t come to the English class any […]…
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Ruby Today is Wednesday. we are study English listed music and play computer game. So,today is fine. 好,第二句又重複動詞了喔!!而且要注意拼字的部分,還有時態!!所以第二句應改成We studied English, listened to music, […]…
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ruby Today is Thurday. I piay badminton with Betty. It very fun. I study English and math, Today is very happy. 建議修改為 Today is Thursday. I played badminton with Betty. […]…
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betty Today is very hot.My sister her hands is hurt.It is very ache.Ruby and I are eat two apples. I study English.Chinese and math.I am very happy. 建議修改為: It is hot toda […]…
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appleh21233 Today I feel badly. Because I and my friend not talk happy.She always not to friendly to me,because she think I am her friend.But I don’t like this , I have feeling . […]…
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龐畢度中心(Centre Georges Pompidou)全名為龐畢度國家藝術和文化中心(Centre national d’art et de culture Georges-Pompidou),是座落於法國首都巴黎Beaubourg區的現代藝術博物館。興建於1971年至1977年,於1977年1月開館。 1969年時,法國總統喬治·龐畢度(Georges Pompidou)為 […]…
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每年的七月四號 我總想起那年夏天 一群人在湖畔坐的坐、躺的躺 一起觀看長達30分鐘的精彩煙火 那是在美國求學的日子 七月四號那天 煙火不斷 大的小的 長的短的 各城市都有慶祝活動 那是他們的獨立紀念日 後來 也變成我的一個有美麗回憶的日子 想到這天 總是開心的 配合著音樂舞動的煙火 燦爛奪目 湖畔擠著數以千計的人們 一起在紀念這個日子 一切都很祥和   […]…