初級寫作修改-004 Ruby Today is Wednesday. we are study English listed music and play computer game. So,today is fine. 好,第二句又重複動詞了喔!!而且要注意拼字的部分,還有時態!!所以第二句應改成We studied English, listened to music, and played computer games. 注意,聽音樂要用listen to music喔!! Share You Might Also Like [聖經金句中英對照] 以弗所書4:29 2016-07-17 2014 Barcelona 03 — 聖家堂 2016-01-23 初級寫作修改-011 2010-12-25